tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1790873145576140482.post4074692322798209014..comments2023-07-23T06:26:04.929-04:00Comments on Exiled Poetry & Prose: "Lorca's Lament"DS Bakerhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/07941882876274190272noreply@blogger.comBlogger2125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1790873145576140482.post-64566530243326570062013-08-30T19:56:33.132-04:002013-08-30T19:56:33.132-04:00I really love the changes you made to this poem. I...I really love the changes you made to this poem. It didn't interrupt the natural flow to the piece...the images are astounding and the ending is the clincher! Great job brother!<br />~Rafael Andrade GarzaThe Golden Sentencehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14499786262923344575noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1790873145576140482.post-72441847360261092512011-08-08T13:12:16.303-04:002011-08-08T13:12:16.303-04:00This is such beautiful writing. The words capture...This is such beautiful writing. The words capture the reader and hold their eyes there. I was totally entranced by this work<br />Do not change anything about it. AS it stands let it be<br />trying to work it anymore would ruin it<br />ChrysChryshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07971956886101826218noreply@blogger.com